Expert
- Shows weeks of work
- Audience is very interested
- I've done the work myself
- Research in my words – with my personality in it
- Contains humour(?)
- Interaction with the audience
- Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression
- PowerPoint / presentation has large pics and/or videos and plays automatically
Practitioner
- Shows three or four weeks of work
- Research is mostly in my own words
- Information is interesting and in my own words
- Adults have supported me without doing work for me
- Some humour (?)
- Some interaction with the audience
- Audience is attentive and interested
- Speech is clear
- PowerPoint / presentation has large pics and/or video
Apprentice
- Shows about a week’s work
- A little research – some in my own words
- Adults have done some of the work for me
- No interaction with the audience
- No humour
- Poor presentation
- Few pictures
- Mostly reads the info from the PowerPoint / presentation
Novice
- Reads the words on the presentation
- Clearly started at the last minute
- Hardly any info
- Parents have done a lot of it for me
- No pictures or steps
- Research is straight off the internet
- No humour
- Not finished on time
- Untidy presentation
- Speech is not very clear
Well done, Jaxon. Your reading was very fluent and I found the information interesting. Ryan Nelson has been a great player for New Zealand and Blackburn Rovers. Next time don't put the words you're saying on the screen. Have great big photos and print off a script or record your voice. It's okay to have just a few key words. You looked really relaxed about presenting your work to an audience. Good work, Jaxon.
ReplyDeleteNice P.I Jacko
ReplyDeleteI liked it how you chose him because he is a role model for you.
Next time try to use a script and look at the auduence.
From Cam
Cool P.I. Jaxon I think its good you chose a role model. I like how you had quite a bit of research next time you could get your photos from some where else. But nice P.I.
ReplyDeleteAmazing PI Jaxon.Lots of great facts and info about Ryan Nelson but maybe next time you could
ReplyDeletemabye put some interation with the audience
Lauren
Nice P.I. JB I liked it how it was a good roll model for you and you chose a P.I. you were interested in but next time you could have looked at the audience when you spoke and practised the words before your project but otherwise NICE WORK!!!
ReplyDeleteGreat P.I J.B
ReplyDeleteYou had some great info and you had allot of it.
Next time you could practice speaking some of the words because it took you a long time to pronounce some of the words.
Nice work!
Sam
Nice P.I. jacko!
ReplyDeleteit was really awesome how you did your p.I. on someone you love and you had heaps of information. next time you could get your own pictures but it is pretty hard so I understand!
From Camryn mabey!
great PI Jacko I like how you chose the subject because he was your role model I also liked how you had lots of info but it didnt sound like all of it was in your own words.
ReplyDeleteGreat PI Jaxon. I liked your facts. They were interesting. I also liked how your PI wan't long. It was just the right time. Next time you could have had more pictures and less words. You could have had a script maybe??
ReplyDeleteOther than that, excellent.
Grace :-]
Awesome P.I Jaxon I liked how you did it on your role model and all those interesting facts.
ReplyDeleteBut next time you could interact with the audience and also some more eye contact.
Wow what an interesting Pi Jaxon! I have told many, many classmates this: CAPITAL LETTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (I'm sorry, it's just that incorrect grammar drives me nutty)Apart from that tiny glitch, every thing was fine. I loved how you did your PI on something you enjoyed. BUT I was a bit dissapointed about WHEN you started doing your PI. You said that you saw him on the Olympics!!!!! I loved your PI and thought that the way you made it like a timeline was cool.
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PS: My dad supports Blackburn Rovers :)
nice P.I you answered the questions well and spoke nicely you also had a good amount of information the only thing to improve on is the procreation of some of the words.
ReplyDeleteGreat PI Jaxon, I liked your topic and it was a good reason why you chose the topic. Next time have more pics and less words. Other than that great PI
ReplyDelete~*~ Maddi ~*~
Nice P.I Jaxon, Ireally liked how you spoke really clearly but next time have it in your own words other than that COOL P.I
*~* Jas *~*
That was a nice topic Jaxon. You spoke clearly and loudly. My suggestions for improvement are :
1: Have your own words completely.
2: Get pics from FlickR or something but never mind.
3: Have no words on screen and have a script or voice recordings.
Good anyway though.
Jam :)
Great PI Jaxon you had some good info and you spoke loud but next time you could do some interaction with the audience and learn your words better ~Cindy
ReplyDeleteGreat PI Jaxon you had lots of info but maybe next time don't read the same words as on the screen. ~ BEX???
Jaxon your P.I was really really great. You had a lot of info and everything but what I most enjoyed was that you speaked clearly and you speaked loud it was great. But maybe next time you could make eye contact with the auidience when you are speaking. But apart from that you did GREAT!. ;) From Ben ;)!
ReplyDeleteIt was a good pi but you read it off your slide.
ReplyDeleteVery Good P.I Jaxon
ReplyDeleteYou spoke loud and clear and you had good clear photos. But I think next time you could make the photos bigger and less words and I have one question if you saw him in the Olympics wouldn't that mean one or less weeks to do it but good P.I.
From Anna
Cool pi Jaxon
You spoke clearly and LOUD. Next time you could practice you r words better.
From Salma
Great PI Jaxon, I liked how you had pictures of him. Next time you should look at the audience, not have all the words on the screen, and have free pictures and one question... If you saw him on the Olympics and then decided to do your PI on him wouldn't you only have a week or so to do it???
Sarah ;)
Cool P.I i liked those facts but next time you could have more pics jaide
ReplyDeleteIthrought that was so boring just boring the facts weren't interesting the way you spoke was duall the only good thing was the pictrues and I don't even think they were shared
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ReplyDeleteNice P.I JB liked your info on Ryan and that u did your P.I on something u like. Next time try look at the class. other than that cool P.I